a: Adjective ~
b: little verbal hurdle

What: "Every unnecessary adjective is like a little verbal hurdle for your reader to jump. Would you actually have the energy to attend the event after ploughing through that congested sentence?"

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Date: Oct 8 2013 6:59 PM


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